viernes, 15 de mayo de 2009

Underground

4 comentarios:

  1. whoa... poem blog right?
    i enjoy your writing brother....
    i think you got the talent of writing...
    keep it up pal!!

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  2. Quite nice. Though there are a few grammatical errors, they could be easily fixed.

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  3. The idea behind blog publishing is collaborative writing. Could you please fix them Chiara? I would love your correct version on a comment

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